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Healing Hope by Nieriel Raina | 24 Review(s) |
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spinster | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/16/2015 |
This is a great story. I really like they way you made the reader feel some empathy for the wild dog by using her POV. Please write more chapters, I would hate to see this as another abandoned story. Thanks for a good read! Author Reply: Thank you for the input! It might take me a while, but I never abandon posted works. This will be finished. :) | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/1/2015 |
Ah, but I remember fully. Poor dog! And as one who has been involved in breeding dogs much of my life I understand the term here is technical. Author Reply: Thank you! | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/1/2015 |
A good edit. Now, I can't completely remember what happened to the child. Now to learn what it was. Author Reply: Thank you for reading! :) | |
robnrun | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/18/2015 |
Gripping chapter. Really well done, especially the description of the physical movements of both the horse and dog. It is hard to write detailed action correctly and concisely, keep it up Author Reply: Thank you! I have a lot of inspiration here on the farm. :) Thank for reading! | |