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Healing Hope  by Nieriel Raina 24 Review(s)
spinsterReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/16/2015
This is a great story. I really like they way you made the reader feel some empathy for the wild dog by using her POV. Please write more chapters, I would hate to see this as another abandoned story. Thanks for a good read!

Author Reply: Thank you for the input! It might take me a while, but I never abandon posted works. This will be finished. :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/1/2015
Ah, but I remember fully. Poor dog! And as one who has been involved in breeding dogs much of my life I understand the term here is technical.

Author Reply: Thank you!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/1/2015
A good edit. Now, I can't completely remember what happened to the child. Now to learn what it was.

Author Reply: Thank you for reading! :)

robnrunReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/18/2015
Gripping chapter. Really well done, especially the description of the physical movements of both the horse and dog. It is hard to write detailed action correctly and concisely, keep it up

Author Reply: Thank you! I have a lot of inspiration here on the farm. :) Thank for reading!

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