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Ruin  by Laikwalâssê 67 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/11/2015
The concerns that Elrond and Aragorn both feel are definitely valid! Alas that they are unable to communicate fully with Glorfindel to ascertain his true concerns as well.

Author Reply: Glorfindel will open up soon, yet this will not placate Elrond, I fear. Thank you for a most appreciated review, Larner. Lai

EllieReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/10/2015
How sad and disturbing! I want to know more about this elleth and what Glorfindel may know of her that he is not saying.

Thank you for writing and sharing this story!

Author Reply: thank YOU for reviewing, Ellie. Glorfindel will talk eventually, yet the story of the elleth will remain disturbing, I fear. Lai

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/6/2015
An intriguing mystery. I can understand Glorfindel, but from the clues about her injuries, I agree with Elrond. She will never be whole again. But miracles happen. I just hope they can break the spell and it is not some kind of trap for the unwary. I don't trust Saruman.

Author Reply: and you are right to be wary of Saruman. We want to side with both elves but with an Istari involved......thanks for reviewing, obsidianj. Lai

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/6/2015
This is a fascinating story and I am totally hooked!

Author Reply: I´m so glad because I was so unsure of myself. Thank you for a most appreciated reiew. Lai

lmamcReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/4/2015
Wow, this is getting very interesting. Update soon.

Author Reply: thank you. THe next update is almost done. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/4/2015
What a truly evil spell. *shudders*

Author Reply: indeed, and they have only seen the tip of the misery yet. Thanks for a most appreiated Review, shirebound. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/4/2015
We cannot argue with Elrond's instincts, but I, too, wish to know the history of this woman and to see her freed from the misery in which she now exists. And why did Saruman wall her up as he did?

Author Reply: to heed Elrond´s instincs would not be bad advice. Glorfindel is maybe blind, only seeing her misery. Thanks for a most appreciated Review. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/4/2015
So, there is apparently a reason why this elf woman should not be brought back among the living then, one that Elrond knows but not Glorfindel? I admit to siding with Glorfindel, myself.

Author Reply: I´m too but is Glorfindel really seeing reason? THanks for your Review, Larner. Lai

lmamcReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/30/2015
Very interesting, maybe Glorfindel sensed that the female elf was his other half. Elves are know to be able to sense these things at first sight. Update the next one soon.

Author Reply: ah, you are near the core, but not quite. Bear with me and you will see. Thanks for the review, Imamc. Lai

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/29/2015
Secretive! This is intriguing. Thanks.

Author Reply: indeed. Hang on and you will eventually learn the truth. Thank you so much for reviewing, UTfrog. I really appreciate it. Lai

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