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| Ruin by Laikwalâssę | 67 Review(s) |
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| ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/29/2015 |
| Well opening get eyes and looking around and even screaming are all better than s silence. I hope Elrond pays close attention to the story. Maybe he will learn something useful. Thank you for updating so soon! Author Reply: you are welcome. Even if Elrond can barely believe what Glorfindel is telling him he will learn many news about the fall of Gondolin and the nightmare the woman is caught in. Thanks for your review, ellie. Lai | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/29/2015 |
| What a horrific nightmare this woman must be caught in. I hope she finds healing, or at least peace. Author Reply: the nightmare the woman is caught in is greater than even Elrond and Glorfindel can imagine. Thank you so much for still following my story and reviewing, shirebound, Lai | |
| lmamc | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/22/2015 |
| You did NOT just do that to me! It ws getting so good and then you had to go and do that! I really can't wait for the next chapter. Author Reply: yes I did with much fun- LOL! Iīm glad you are so drawn to my story - REALLY!! Donīt worry the next chapter is already beta readed. Thanks for reviwing. Lai | |
| Matt | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/22/2015 |
| Nice cliffy! Looking forward to learning who Halleth is or at least what she can tell them. Thanks for your hard work on this. Author Reply: cliffies are my favourite - LOL! You will be surprised as Elrond who the woman really is. Itīs hard work because of the language but always fun to write. Thanks for a most appreciated rveiew. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/21/2015 |
| Well, hopefully this will allow some shifting of expectations and willingness on all sides to meet more needs than merely those of one mysterious woman. Love the buildup in the tension of the meeting. Author Reply: Glorfindel has a good reason to only focus on the woman, yet he had also duties Elrond is not willing to neglect. Iīm glad you liked the meeting - a conversation is no easy stuff. Thank you so much for reviewing, Larner. Lai | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/21/2015 |
| Oh my goodness, *now* what will happen? *paces* Author Reply: our Elf-Lords are as anxious as you - so have a bit patience. Thanks for a most appreciated review, shirebound. Lai | |
| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/21/2015 |
| Glorfindel must have been really annoying and difficult to set everyone on edge like this. I hope that Glorfindel will not be disappointed with the end result of his poor behavior. At least they have a name for her and good news about her. Can't wait for more! Author Reply: Glorfindel can be really annoying when his mind is set. Yet he should hear his Lordīs warnings. Will the awakening bring the desired result? Thank you so much reviewing, Ellie. Lai | |
| lmamc | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/13/2015 |
| Well, I guess I can see where Elrond is coming from. I just hope Glorfindel is not disappointed. Author Reply: Elondīs concerns are valid but Glorfindel is not reeady to see this just yet. Thanks for reviewing and following my story. Lai | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/13/2015 |
| He had to remind himself again that he was now a king of men and that the affairs of the elves were no longer his focus and responsibility. I like that detail. Author Reply: Aragorn will never be able to shake off his life with the elves, even if his life now lies with men. I can so sympathize with him. Thank you for a most appreciated review, shirebound. Lai | |
| matt | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/12/2015 |
| I've followed this story since ch3 and like it but am confused on this chapter's title. Nothing particularly "bad" seems to happen here to cause the naming of the chapter to be so. Very curious to see where you take this. Thanks for your hard work on it. Author Reply: hard work but always fun. Iīm glad you are still following my story. Thank you for reviewing. It means a lot to me. Lai | |