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| Dol Guldur by Arnakhor | 27 Review(s) |
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| Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/8/2018 | |
| Far be it from me to find fault with your choice of name, just wondering. I will just think of her as of some latter-day Aredhel. Author Reply: Yes, I can see similarities between Drianna and Aredhel. Thanks for that observation. I've also created names for Aranarth's two brothers in the chapter I just put up this morning. I believe these are the last of the created names for primary male or female characters in the book. I have created names for some of Radagast's creatures. Some of which will be derivative of their actual species names. That's a few chapters from now when they 'practice' their role in the finale. | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/8/2018 | |
| Interesting addition to your dramatis personae... What do you base her name on? Desn't sound very Numenorean. Maybe Mardil doesn't give much about bloodlines himself? Author Reply: I wanted a strong female character included as part of the group, a somewhat independent, impetuous nature she would have to learn to mange to make a positive contribution in a predominantly male cast. Eowyn made her contributions in LOTR, notably at the battle at Minas Tirith, but she had to resort to subterfuge to get to the battle scene. I wanted Drianna to be included up front, even if it made some uncomfortable for a while, as they adjusted to her and she to them. As to her name. Yes, not very Numenorean. Not for fault of Mardil. The blame lies with the author. If you think Drianna is distracting, I would welcome any thoughts you have for something else that would capture her persona and yet feel feminine. Struggled going through naming websites. With the introduction of Aranarth’s brothers in the next chapter, most of the cast will be assembled. I like to develop the characters sufficiently to bring them alive, distinct, so their actions feel appropriate to their personas. Radagast will be marshalling his own army of forest creatures and two of the captains will get some attention as they feature prominently in the finale which features simultaneous battles at Dol Guldur and in the plains at the southern edge of Mirkwood. Some twists and turns, surprises and sacrifices await. Many thanks again for continuing to read and provide comments. | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/7/2018 | |
| Thank you for another chapter - really curious to find out about Hagar's role! Author Reply: He is one part of a coordinated effort of Wizards, Dunedain, Elves, men and women of Gondor, and to be revealed creatures of the forest mobilized by Radagast. It will be an elaborate ruse to trick Sauron and expel him from Dol Guldur. Still more characters to introduce. First is Drianna, fiery daughter of Mardil, Steward of Gondor. Then we meet Aranarth's two brothers, including the mysterious Ardugan. Author Reply: I really appreciate you reading my book and your comments. | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/5/2018 | |
| Another great chapter! Keep it up, I really like your detailed descriptions! Author Reply: Thanks! I was worried about providing too much detail, but I do like to paint the picture for the reader as fully as I can, bringing it alive. The next chapter will feature a visit by Gandalf and Hagar to Radagast the Brown at his forest home in Rhosgobel. | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/2/2018 | |
| Great story! Really looking forward to seeing more of it! Author Reply: Thanks for your review! The next chapter takes us inside Dol Guldur as Sauron has created it in T.A. 2063. | |
| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/30/2018 |
| I am really happy that this story is going to be a long one. Are you going to add Mirkwood Elves? Great chapter. Author Reply: It is going to be a full length book. A good portion of it will be spent in Mirkwood where Sauron's depredations on the forest will be detailed. Haldir of Lorien will be among Gandalf's task force going into Mirkwood which will be a dangerous place. Dol Gudlur's internal menaces will be covered. Other creatures mobilized by Radagast will play a crucial role (no spoilers at this point!). Lorien will provide aid. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. | |
| mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/27/2018 |
| I really enjoy your story. Thank you for sharing Author Reply: Thanks so much for you comments and for reading. There are many more chapters to come. I think you'll find Radagast the Brown's role and that of the creatures who become his allies both satisfying and poignant. Gondor's Steward and his children and Aranarth's brothers and son also feature prominently. | |