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| The Great Escape by jenolas | 59 Review(s) |
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| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/7/2004 |
| I liked your version of why Oropher left Doriath, jenolas. Very original and inventive. I could definitely see Galadriel making that kind of threat to someone who angered her. Now, I'm heading off to the next chapter! Author Reply: Galadriel is definitely not a lady to be messed with, I agree. | |
| Karri | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/6/2004 |
| Very entertaining! The interaction between Glorfindel and Erestor was just brilliant. :-) Author Reply: In case you did not notice, they are two of my favourites! | |
| Dot | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/6/2004 |
| *sigh* I really am enjoying this story. I know I’ve said it before but I love the way you write the relationship between Glorfindel and Erestor. There’s such ease between them and their playfulness always makes me smile! A restless Glorfindel is obviously an annoying Glorfindel – I can’t stand people reading over my shoulder either! The thing is, though, it’s so sweet that he really only wants Erestor’s company that you really have to forgive him… What a lovely image of Erestor reading to him as he rests his head on his lap. It’s interesting that Elrohir has seen the two behaving so affectionately together before but Elladan hasn’t. It seems to unsettle him at first but I like that neither is unduly bothered or judgemental. As Elladan says, “Glorfindel and Erestor have been friends forever.” Maybe it’s just strange for them to see Erestor so relaxed and open. I wonder who wrote that book? Maybe Celeborn himself. My absolute favourite part of this chapter was when Erestor coughs and Glorfindel offers him some wine. It’s probably a strange thing to pick out but it’s just such a kind and genuine gesture and besides, I think you’re such a genius when it comes to adding little details that mightn’t seem important story-wise but actually go a long way to giving insights into characters:-) Those two sons of Elrond are born troublemakers! I’m so impressed at their little trick, though. I don’t know how you came up with it. I love the fact that accurate prediction of the victims’ behaviour was so integral to its success as well – and it worked perfectly! I admit, though, that I was kind of glad when Glorfindel and Erestor tried to make them feel bad – Galadriel would *not* be impressed if Glorfindel was going around with black fingers! And yay for Erestor besting the twins again! I could almost hear him and Glorfindel chuckling away together at the end. And maybe I might have chuckled right along with them;-) Author Reply: Thank you for your compliment about my characterisation and for noticing the more subtle nuances I sometimes employ. I understand what I am trying to do, of course, but I often wonder if anyone else sees between the lines. It is definitely uncommon for Erestor to be so demonstrative towards Glorfindel in public, but I guess he is so relaxed at the moment that he has forgotten to be reserved. Undoubtedly a result of Glorfindel's free spirited nature, I suspect. Look for a little more trouble to come as a result of the blackberries. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/6/2004 |
| I do like the Glorfindel/Erestor relationship. They have such a good-natured affection for each other - and for the little monkeys of Elrondions. I liked Legolas / Celeborn too. In fact, all these elves seem to be thoroughly pleasant people. Which is good. Author Reply: Yes, there are no unfriendly relationships amongst this group, and they are all of carefree disposition, expecially in the freedom of the forest. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/6/2004 |
| Games within games here! Apparently you have to get up mighty early in the morning to outfox Erestor. Author Reply: Early morning with Erestor?... sounds good to me! | |
| Jules2002@aol.com | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/5/2004 |
| Okay I guess I should have read this chapter before I reviewed the last one. Okay Galadriel is okay if she gets along with Thranduil. Have to admit, I love her taking care of the elf bothering her. Maybe he'll think twice next time. Never underetimate nad ellyth. I loved the Legolas/Celeborn bonding. Sweetie Legolas needs all his family. thanks for writing Jule Author Reply: You are welcome, and thanks for taking the time to review. | |
| Jules | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/5/2004 |
| Great story. I have to admit in the wedding tale I was completely on Thranduil's side. I think he proved his love to Elisiel by letting Galadriel be there let alone plan the wedding. Alps please, Thranduil is a proud Sindar elf and Silvan leader. The idea of trying to dress his Nolder is insulting. Thanks for writng Jules Author Reply: I think Thranduil was probably overreacting slightly, but he was not accustomed to having his attire selected for him, especially by Galadriel. | |
| Karri | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/5/2004 |
| A great chapter! I enjoy all the history you are giving us in this story. Author Reply: Thanks! It certainly presents the perfect opportunity for a few small 'flashbacks', and there are more yet to come. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/5/2004 |
| I really enjoyed the story about Thranduil in Doriath. When Celeborn first started talking about it, I was as eager as Legolas to hear more. And the elf who tried to kiss her must have been a great fool. Galadriel is far more scary than Thranduil in my opinion. Author Reply: I agree that Galadriel is far more scary than Thranduil, who is really a sweetheart of an elf as far as I am concerned. The other elf was certainly foolish, but the elder generation of Elves were not by any means perfect, nor renowned for their common sense in some cases. | |
| Dot | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/5/2004 |
| Oh, lovely chapter. Those elves have no intention of going back, do they?! “Legolas, shall we see what these old trees recall of the years gone by?” I love seeing this side to Celeborn, and it’s wonderful that he recognises their love for the trees as something he and Legolas can share. I have to smile too when I see him being so affectionate with his grandsons:) It sounds like Elladan and Elrohir have been well-behaved for far too long and need to vent some mischief. It’s quite funny to see the way Glorfindel and Erestor read them so easily and just resign themselves to waiting for whatever will happen. I like that Celeborn asks Legolas to drop his title. Celeborn seems to not only respect the younger elf but I get the sense that he’s actually quite pleased to have an opportunity to spend some time with him, especially as he clearly feels an affection for Thranduil. That little story was fascinating. I was completely intrigued when I saw how painful Celeborn found even contemplating it. I can well imagine that everyone is enchanted by Galadriel’s beauty but for a race that is so respectful of the marriage bond, it must have been a complete shock for this elf to not only approach her but try to kiss her. Thranduil did exactly the right thing. Such a gentleman. Or whatever the elven equivalent is… I can see how the incident – and Thranduil’s reaction – could cause trouble among the more political of them. Oropher seems to have completely over-reacted, although I suspect that he was probably unhappy anyway and this was just the excuse he needed to make a decision that he probably already had thought of anyway. It’s just such a pity that he didn’t really treat Thranduil with the respect he deserved. Fair play to Thranduil for following duty and going with his father in the end. Crikey, how different things would have been if he hadn’t! “Nay, of course not! You misunderstand. She threatened to remove a certain body part.” LOL! Well done, Galadriel. I notice Celeborn seems rather proud of his wife’s ability to handle herself too! At least she doesn’t seem to mind that nearly all the male elves have disappeared. I love the way Celeborn gets all paternal with Legolas at the end – although that poor elf *really* doesn’t seem to like people teasing him about maidens. Great chapter. I really enjoyed seeing these two elves together. *wanders off to the fridge for some strawberries* Author Reply: No, they do not want to go back, not unless they are forced to, it is so much more pleaseant in the forest. Elladan and Elrohir have yet to find their own amusement, but rest assured they will ( next chapter). Galadriel is not an elf to be messed with, as lovely and elegant as she appears outwardly, her inner strength has seen her through very difficult times. Celeborn is naturally proud of his wife, and he knows how well she can skillfully wield a sword when necessary! :) Strawberries, eh Dot? In the hopes of attracting a couple of young Peredhel, perhaps? | |