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| Trust a Brandybuck and a Took! by Grey Wonderer | 618 Review(s) |
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| Pearl Took | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/25/2004 |
| Great fun! I love that Pip was in the tree. Merry should have let him get Sam in the arse! hehehe. Author Reply: I almost let him get Sam in the arse, but decided to let Sam out-smart them instead. Sadly, then I turned on Sam and let him be drawn into the plot! LOl I never knew where I'm going when I start! Thanks for reviewing! | |
| Hai Took | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/24/2004 |
| lol! That was great! I laughed through the whole thing! My first thought was that someone's aim was off and they would end up braking a window, but I don't know if pebble from a sling shot would do that. Poor, Sam being the one to actually hit Frodo! It was lots of fun, thank you! Author Reply: I almost did have them break something until the idea of somone, Frodo, being hit came to me and then I decided that might be an interesting way to go. I started to make Sam a bad shot, but changed my mind and just had Frodo get in the way. Glad you enjoyed it and thank s for readig these! | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/23/2004 |
| You've done it again, LOL! I really love Sam playing detective, and thet Merry and Pip are able to tempt him to do just what he caught them at! Hilarious! Author Reply: I started to let his catching them be the end of it, but then I decided that Sam deserved a chance to shoot at something. He was going to hit something breakable but then, well, Frodo got in the way. LOL | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/23/2004 |
| "Frodo is *always* reading!" Somehow I don't find that hard to believe. “Brilliant,” Merry growled. “Now, will you please get your foot off of me?” You have a deft sense of timing, as usual. Thanks for an enjoyable read! Author Reply: So glad that you liked it. I just seem to be writing only these short fictions at the moment. Before, I couldn't seem to end one even when it needed ending, and now I'm doing this. LOL I never know what's coming. | |
| Pearl Took | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/21/2004 |
| Sorry I'm late in getting to this, vacation and then computer glitches. I am having sooooo much fun reading these!! They brighten my day. Thank you for sharing them with us all. Author Reply: So glad that you are having a good time with these. Hope the vacation was a good one. I know how those computer glitches can be and I hope yours is not giving youtoo much trouble. Wouldn't want anything to happen to future chapters of "While We Dwelt in Fear" ! Thanks for reading! | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/20/2004 |
| I love Pippin's joyous certainty that running into the fort again would work fine. And Merry's decision that he needs to think a bit more about braking - it just seems so typical of both of them. Author Reply: Merry has to be the practical one because Pipin just figures if they get away with it once, it should work again. Thanks for all of your lovely reviews. | |
| Hai Took | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/20/2004 |
| Such attachment at such a young age! I guess that was a big part of thier foundation as friends! Very sweet! Thank you for such wonderful stories! Author Reply: I love the way little children look at older ones. They always want to go with the bigger kids and I think Pippin was always wanting to go with his Merry. | |
| Hai Took | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/20/2004 |
| The last bit was great! "“Won’t running into the fort again work?”" That Pip was brave enough to want to go with Merry was very nice. I like the way you wrote Freddy and Folco, that they would tease Merry a bit but still realize that it could be serious if things went wrong. Thank you for the tale! Author Reply: Freddy and Falco don't mind teasing a bit but they don't want anyone to get hurt. Glad you liked them in this one. | |
| Hai Took | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/20/2004 |
| That was great! At least there wasn't a snake to be found! But a skunk? Oh dear! And Frodo got it instead of Merry! Frodo should have made Merry look for the "kitty" and Frodo should have taken Pippin! I like what Pip calls Bilbo! What fun! Thank you! Author Reply: Thanks so much for reading all of these. Your reviews are a great help to me. | |
| Hai Took | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/20/2004 |
| Pippin thinking he was going to be trapped in a bucket forever, poor guy! I laughed thorugh the whole thing! I like the way you write Pearl, calm in the face of a problem such as this must have been difficult! Thank for asuch a fun story! Author Reply: As the oldest, I think Pearl would have to be the one in charge and calm in the face of trouble. It's a tough job but someone has to do it. | |