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When the King Comes Back by shirebound | 30 Review(s) |
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AspenJules | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/31/2006 |
Yikes! That was quite a description of the explosion, and then to have something hit him from behind as the ground rushed up to hit him from in front!! EEEE!! Not good! And... um.... hopefully poor wee Frodo isn't going to get squished between hard ground and harder *hmmmmm, pauses a moment to contemplate* Ranger!? I love Halbarad, I love Sam's rendition of his old Gaffer, and especially I like Sam backpedaling as he sees he's worried Frodo with his descriptions of the birthing process. *giggles* I'm sure Sam's seen it plenty, but I guess maybe Frodo's missed the "messy" parts, hmm? Ok... bring on the cuddling! *calls first shift for Ranger/hobbit cuddling* Author Reply: See what I have to resort to in order to necessitate Ranger/hobbit cuddling? Oooh, those tricksy sparklers.... *glares at them* No, I don't suspect Frodo has seen many (if any) babies a-birthin'! Should be fun. :D | |
Elwen | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/31/2006 |
Oh yum! Let the angst begin. Author Reply: Indeed. *rubs hands* *prepares blankets and warm fire* | |
Queen Galadriel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/31/2006 |
No!!! No no no no no, you cannot do that, that is *not* *fair*! *squirms* Grrrrr... And I'm going to be leaving soon to be gone all summer long, so it's likely I'm going to miss the rest of this till I get back! Oh, that is *evil*! *gives you the begging pup look* Oh, please update soon, pleeeeease? *sigh* Oh, well, this just gives me one more reason to write a story full of cliff-hangers, to put all those who ever tormented me with them through the agony! *grin* "Scrap o' dog..." awww that's cute. I'd love to see the Gamgees get a pup. They just need to bring Gaffer into Bag End and "show" him the puppies, and then one could be really loving, and one of the kids could give him the begging look, and I bet he'd give in. :) This is a charming Shire market. I just hope nobody got too seriously hurt! God bless, Galadriel Author Reply: I hope your summer plans are fun ones, QG! And I'll resolve the evil cliffie as soon as possible so we can get to the good (healing) stuff. :D | |
harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/31/2006 |
Ooops! Famous last words Aragorn. Well...not too last I hope. Lovely picture of Shire Life but pleeeeese don't keep us dangling too long Shirebound! Author Reply: I'll try not to, Harrowcat! Hopefully I can get some writing done this weekend. | |
Elemmírë | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/31/2006 |
I just came home from working the nightshift to find another delightful chapter posted. All I have to say is ..... Urrghhh!!! You left off THERE????!!!!!!! Woo Hoo! Bring on the hurt & comfort! P.S. I hope Sam gets a puppy in the end :) Author Reply: Hurt and comfort coming right up! (As soon as I can get it written) :D | |
Gayalondiel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/31/2006 |
Oh no! They better not be hurt... ...much... ...not too badly... ...a bit bruised and battered, maybe... ...oh, who am I kidding? Yay for h/c! This line made me giggle: ‘There’ll be no animals here unless they give wool, meat, or eggs, and that’s the end of it.’ You have the Gaffer's tone down pat, my dear *hugs* Gaya xxx Author Reply: H/c forever! I can never get enough, especially if it's h/cccc. I suspect "Gruff" Gaffer is a softie at heart, especially in *this* universe! *hugs back* | |
Amy | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/31/2006 |
You blew them up! You blew them up in the Shire! *looks accusingly at shirebound* Now you have to make them better! Author Reply: Is there ANY doubt that I'll make them better? With lots of snuggles and TLC? That's the part I love the best. *scurries away to write more* | |
Ariel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/31/2006 |
*rubs hands hopefully* Oh, yeah... sorry. I am so worried for them! *blush* Author Reply: Some hurt, some comfortcomfortcomfort... Just can't resist! :D | |
Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/31/2006 |
Here we were, enjoying a nice lovely day at the market, then-- EEEP! I hope the next chapter isn't too long in coming! Author Reply: Yes, no place is safe! *grins* I hope to find time this weekend to work on chapter 3. Thanks, Breon! | |
SurgicalSteel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/31/2006 |
*bounce*squee* Loved this to pieces - perceptive Halbarad, Sam telling Frodo to not worry about the puppy's birth, Aragorn in teaching mode... just lovely! Author Reply: Thank you so much. Much more of everything to come. :D | |