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Elladan and Elrohir's Not So Excellent Adventure  by Fiondil 44 Review(s)
SurgicalSteelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/25/2006
Well, that has potential. It'll be interesting to see what sort of trouble the twins get up to - and would be somewhat funny if they ended up rescuing their 'protectors.'

Author Reply: Funny indeed! You'll just have to wait and find out. I think there will be a surprise or two for most readers.

NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/25/2006
Sounds like the twins are off on a great disaster adventure! I am glad Elrond sent people to watch over them, though it sounds like they may have their own troubles.

So do you have Celeborn and Galadriel visiting Lothlorien for an extended period of time? It is always interesting to imagine where they might be early in the Third Age and what they might be up to.

Author Reply: "Disaster" is probably closer to the truth! As for Celeborn and Galadriel... you'll just have to wait and see, won't you? *grin*

Calenlass GreenleafReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/25/2006
Interesting beginning. 'Tis only the first chapter, and there's already an avalanche.
Awaiting the next chapter...:-P

Author Reply: Well, I had to have something interesting happen to the Twins right off, didn't I? LOL. Glad you liked the beginning. Stay tuned, it only gets better (or worse, as the case may be).

eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/25/2006
Welcome back Fiondil,
Since I loved your other story, I'm estatic to see this one and what a great beginning.

So now it is the terrible twins turn. As a mom of twin 13 yr old boys I shudder to think of what trouble El & El can get into. Can elves hair turn white? I really enjoy the way you write the couples in your stories especially Eluwan & Thandir, nice to see a little passion in our elves. And as always love the chapter titles (Valar, I'm getting old) though now I'm going to have that little ditty going around in my head all day with a West Virginia accent! LOL

Update soon
Eliza

Author Reply: Glad to be back Eliza (though I never really left). *grin* And I'm glad you like the way this story begins. I think elves are more passionate than we give them credit for and I wanted to show that in certain ways. I had a lot of fun with Eluwen and Thandir. I think they're very interesting characters in their own right.

Don't worry, I'll be updating fairly regularly. This story is only about half as long as the last so you won't have too long of a wait.

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