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| tolo dan na galad (`come back to the light`) by Laikwalâssê | 48 Review(s) |
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| minuial | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/15/2011 |
| It's great to see them in Imladris where they will be safer even though the danger remains. I like very much the strong bonds between the twins and between them and Elrond. Looking forward to the next chapters when, hopefully, Glorfindel's situation will improve. Great work. Author Reply: they are far from save that I can promise. I´ve always imagined the twins as strong bonded and also with their father. I´m glad the description worked. Thank you so much for letting me know and for reading and reviewing. Lai | |
| ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/14/2011 |
| At least they are back home safe and sound again - even if they did face some pretty tough duties. Elrond is very fortunate to have Erestor to help him with things. Loved seeing the bonds of love between the twins and Elrond. Hope Glorfy gets well soon! Author Reply: Hi ellie, yes Elrond can be fortunate to have such loyal elves around to help him through this dark time. I´m glad the display of emotions worked. Thank you so much for your review. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/12/2011 |
| No, they do not wish to lose both Glorfindel and their father. And whoever is out there could well be lying in wait. Author Reply: No, they won´t and I do not envy them right now. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Larner. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/12/2011 |
| Definitely not a sight anyone wishes to see, and to know that the malicious will that began it remains at hand makes it worse. Now--to get him home as quickly and gently as possible. Author Reply: even for the warriors used to constant battles, it was not an every-day occurence, I deem. To bring him home alive is now the premise. Thank you so much for your review. Lai | |
| ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/9/2011 |
| That was a scary occurence with Glorfindel. Glad he and Elrond are okay :-) One thing I do ask of you, in fact beg of you, when writing about Glorfindel: please stop referring to him as "the blond". To me that invokes visions of some cheap bimbo who uses lots of hair dye and that is not how I envision my gallant hero the balrog slayer. I realise that you are trying to find differnt ways of referring to Glorfindel without constantly repeating his name, but constant references to his hair color are distracting from the fascinating tale you are trying to tell. Big hugs and I look forward to the next chapter. Author Reply: Hello Ellie, are Elrond and Glorfindel really ok? I would be glad if you will stay with me to find out. And I´m grateful for your advice and I will heed it, I promise!!You are right it sounds...odd, at least for Glorfindel. Hugs back, Lai | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/9/2011 |
| Not sure how I missed this but I'm glad I saw it. So Glorfi at least is alive, but for how long remains the question. And Elrond detected some evil presence just waiting to pounce on them again. The suspense is building. Will they make it home safely? Looking forward to more. Author Reply: no matter, Fiondil, now you are here and I´m glad. It will definitely not be the last what they encountered of the evil presence. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Lai | |
| GreyLynx | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/9/2011 |
| Oh, Laikwalâssê you keep bringing me all these lovely Elrond and Glorfindel fics. Makes my day everytime ^^ Love your plot. Very angsty/hurt/comforty. Please keep writing! Cheers! :D Author Reply: Hello Grey Lynx. I´m flattened. What can I answer to such a lovely review? Thank you so much. I´m glad and happy that you like my story and be reassured: I will keep writing. It´s too much fun. And angst/hurt/comfort always works best but I will take care of our elves, I promise. Lai | |
| minuial | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/2/2011 |
| Good to see that Glorfindel is alive even if barely. It's also good that they will go home. Great chapter. Looking forward to see who is behind that evil presence and how Glorfindel was defeated. Author Reply: the trial is not over yet, I promise. I´m so glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing. Lai | |
| ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/2/2011 |
| I'm so glad that Glorfy is alive at least. I hope he makes it home okay. Poor Elrond in dealing with this, it must be very had. I wonder what the evil mental menace is. Author Reply: yes, he´s alive, but that is all the positve about it. Poor Elrond indeed! Stay with me and you will find out about the evil. Ellie, thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Lai | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/27/2011 |
| Nicely done for such a horrific moment. I had to smile with Elrond deciding to lead the rescue/retrieval mission. A captain does not leave his ship. You gave a very good reason for his going. Author Reply: Thank you. I´m glad Elrond sounded true despite his decision to come. Special happenings require special measures. I´m glad for your smile. Lai | |