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Elf Academy 3: The Enemy Within  by Fiondil 22 Review(s)
SoledadReviewed Chapter: 19 on 3/3/2014
Go, Derek! That will teach them some sour truths. I'm particularly glad that he called Gilvegil upon his bullying Alex. Really, Gilvegil of all people should have known better. I'm very disappointed with him - not that he'd care, I'm just a lowly moretal, after all.

I very much loved Dave Michaelson telling the Elves the simple truths of life. They can do what they will, but the townspeople will turn to Glorfindel, no matter what. Hehehe.

And now I have to wait until Friday to see Manwë's side of the whole mess? That's not fair. (I would pout, but at my age it would look silly...)

Author Reply: Hi Soledad. Yeah, Derek has reached his boiling point. You have to watch out for the quiet ones. *grin*

And Dave is nobody's fool and tells it like it is.

We'll see what Manwë has to say and how he says it in the next chapter. No guarantee that he'll get through to everyone but he will let people know how the Valar feel about things.

Thanks for reviewing. I very much appreciate it.

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 19 on 3/3/2014
Aaaaaaa! I do not want to wait until Friday for an update. This was a fantastic chapter. You very neatly summarized the story to date. The situation is millennia in the making and no resolution is simple, even if Lord Manwe says so. Great storytelling. Go Derek!

Author Reply: Sorry, UTfrog. I'm afraid you'll just have to wait. Trust me, it'll be worth it (or at least I hope it will be) Anyway, I'm glad you liked the summary of the story and you're right that this situation is millennia in the making and there are no easy solutions. And Derek rocks for sure! LOL! Thanks for reviewing. It's very much appreciated.

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