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Ruin  by Laikwalâssê 67 Review(s)
shireboundReviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/10/2015
“Elrond, I will stay with her, no matter what. Maybe when she has recovered I will follow, but now she needs me and I will not let her down a second time.”

What a monumental and noble decision to make.

Author Reply: indeed, but it is a noble and ancient elf making it. Thank you so much for reviewing, shirebound. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/30/2015
Both have reason to be concerned, as do Namo and Vaire as well. Now, to see if she can and does begin to waken....

Author Reply: indeed all have reason to be concerned. Elrond´s premonitions should not be shoved aside....thank you for reviewing, Larner. Lai

EllieReviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/28/2015
What a horrible dilemma for everyone involved!

Author Reply: indeed and there seems no solution so far! Thank you for a most appreciated Review, Ellie. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/20/2015
A terrible story, and a terrible question now as to the true identity of the woman now lying in Elrond's infirmary.

Only time will tell now, of course. Now, to see to what she will waken.

Author Reply: hopefully the awakening and what follows is not another shock for poor Glorfindel? Thanky ou for reviewing, Larner. Lai

lmamcReviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/19/2015
Wow, this chapter almost made me cry. I remember the story from The Silmarillion and it was just horrible what happened. I think it was Hurin who gave away the location of Gondolin which brought about its destruction.Update the next one soon.

Author Reply: this story about the destruction makes me swallow every time I read or write about it. Right, it was just horrible. Thank you for a most appreciated review. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/19/2015
Oh my, what horrific memories. Of course he needs to be sure if this woman is his beloved!

Author Reply: the situation must be unbearable for Glorfindel that he maybe has left her behind alive....and we have to know too. LOL. Thanks for reviewing, shirebound

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/9/2015
Ah, but it's a pleasant moment for Glorfindel, I'd think, to find the woman who stirs his heart! Heh!

Author Reply: indeed, but the time of joy will not last long as history tells us. Thanks for reviewing, Larner. Lai

lmamcReviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/9/2015
Great chapter, it's nice to have a name to the lady elf. Update the next chapter soon.

Author Reply: thank you. Yes, she has a name now and a lovely one too. Thank you for a most appreciated review. Update is on the way. Lai

lmamcReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/30/2015
It was getting to the good part. It would be nice if Glorfindel did have a love interest. Update soon.

Author Reply: Glorfindel believes that he have found his former love. Let us hope he is right. LOL. Thanks for reviewing. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/29/2015
Now, this is interesting! To see now to what she comes.

Author Reply: Elrond will not believe what Glorfindel is telling, but the woman should be proof enough, or? Thank you for a most appreciated review, Larner. Lai

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